You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of local college. In your letter, you should tell: - where your apartment is located - when the room will be available - what your requirements for a student to stay there are Begin your letter as follow: Dear…,

Dear Mr. Mark, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about renting out

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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apartment second room. I live on the 21st Robi Street in Downtown Halifax, the unit is on the 10th floor of the building, facing

towards

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apply

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the Atlantic

ocean

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Ocean

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. The location is very

convienent

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convenient

because it is just 5

minutes

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5-minute

walk away from the Dalhousie University campus. Beginning next month, on 2nd September 2025, the room will be available to move in. Ideally, any rental place is usually ready to settle in on the 1st of any given month.

However

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, the old tenants have some flight

disruption

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and they

would

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will

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be leaving on the Midnight of the 1st September. For any student who would be interested in

this

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place, there will be several documents

requirment

Correct your spelling

required

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such

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, such

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Punctuation problem

apply

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an ID,

signed

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a signed

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agreement letter and

advance

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an advance

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fee of $200. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours

sincerly

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sincerely

, Ali

alyshan.maredia

Aug 23, 2025

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structure

Break the text into clear paragraphs. One idea per paragraph helps the reader.

grammar

Check spelling and grammar. 'convienent' should be 'convenient', 'sincerely' etc.

clarity

Be clear with dates. If the room is ready to move in from 2 September, say this plainly.

content

List the needed papers as bullet items to show you are ready.

tone

Keep a formal tone. Use 'Dear Sir or Madam' if you do not know the officer's name, and end with 'Yours sincerely' with your name.

content

You tell where the place is and how near it is to the campus.

content

You say when the room will be free and what papers you want from a student.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

151 words

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