The given table provides
an
information about the Australian workforce in six various industries Correct article usage
apply
namely
, manufacturing, retail, health care, construction, education and tourism Punctuation problem
, namely
in
1989 and 2009.
Punctuation problem
, in
Overall
, it is evident that over the 20 years, some industries Linking Words
shows
Correct subject-verb agreement
show
slightly
rising trend and a very few stay about the same.
In the beginning, employment in manufacturing was 15 %, but by the end of Correct article usage
a slightly
year
it significantly dropped to 9.8 %. Add a comma
year,
Similarly
, at that time, the ratio of workers in Linking Words
retail
industry was 11.8 % and in 2009 it reduced to 10.1 % respectively. Correct article usage
the retail
Furthermore
, Linking Words
healthcare
section Correct article usage
the healthcare
achieves
the highest increment of workers in Wrong verb form
achieved
Linking Words
last
year Correct article usage
the last
as compare
to others Change preposition
compared
which
was 11.3 % from 9.6 %.
Punctuation problem
, which
On the other hand
, Linking Words
rest
of the three industries Correct article usage
the rest
shows
lower workforce in Correct subject-verb agreement
show
beginning
Correct article usage
the beginning
Linking Words
such
asPunctuation problem
, such
,
7.6 % for construction Punctuation problem
apply
which
Punctuation problem
, which
enhanced up
to 8.3 %, 6.8 % for education to 7Verb problem
increased
.
5 % and tourismPunctuation problem
,
where
, in start public Rephrase
apply
showed
lower interest but by the end of the Correct word order
interest showed
year
it substantially reached around 7.3 %.Add a comma
year,