The graph below shows a comparison between the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a comparison between the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows a comparison between the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data
gragh
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graph
presents a comparison between the
unworker
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number of workers
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and the
amount
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number
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of immigrants between 1988 and 2008 . 
Overall
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, from 1988 to
1990
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1990,
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the
people
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who
leave
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left
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the
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apply
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irland
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Ireland
was stable .
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however
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however,
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the
unemploye
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unemployment
was unstable
but
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, but
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around 1994 it
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apply
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declined dramatically .
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in
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In
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addition
on
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to
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what
it
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apply
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is shown
on
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in
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2000th
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2000th,
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the unworked
people
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was
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were
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on the same
ring
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level
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around 6% .
On the other
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hand
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hand,
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the
people
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who
leave
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left
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there
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their
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town between 1990 and 1996
was
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were
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dropped slightly
as
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, as
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the unemployed
it
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. It
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is
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apply
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might be shown
if
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that if
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there
is
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are
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no
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people
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people,
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than
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then
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will
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there will
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not
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apply
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be
a
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no
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pollution.
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Moreover
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in
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from
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2000
until
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to
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the
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apply
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2008
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2008,
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the
people
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increas
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increased
sharply from 8% to 14% .
to
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To
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summarize
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summarise
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the
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, the
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unemployment and
the
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apply
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immigrated
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immigration
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were the same amount every year
if
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; if
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they
rose
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rose,
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they rose together
and
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, and
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the opposite
it
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apply
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seems right .

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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