Many city centers these days have traffic flow problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build fast ring roads on the outskirts of a city, taking traffic away from the centre. While this is helpful in some ways, it also causes new problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Many downtowns have

traffic

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jams now

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congestion and pollution. One solution is to construct fast ring

roads

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on the edge of a

city

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, diverting

traffic

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away from the centre.

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this

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is helpful in some ways, it

also

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causes new issues.

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essay agrees with

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statement. Ring

roads

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are built far from the

city

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by the government, so that they eliminate the congestion forever, develop the economy and ecology, a security, and

infrastructure

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improve infrastructure

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. I believe that constructing the ring

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far from the

city

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,

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is useful to the ecology and security ,

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some beneficial causes. Obviously, the ring

roads

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are built for transit cars, so that they can rotate around the

city

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by the ring

roads

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instead

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of entering the

city

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centre and causing a

traffic

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jam, else

destroy

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the ecology and security around the

city

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.

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, lorries are heavy

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and not well secured. They cause the main impact to be the

traffic

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jam, and pollute the air. To build the ring

roads

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also

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brings a new impetus to the

city

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to be the best else by some ways. There are the infrastructure and the economy. When the ring

roads

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are built around the edge of the

city

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, the

city

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will extend in the future, and

instead

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of their place, the government will build skyscrapers of high quality.

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, Almaty, one of the best cities in Kazakhstan

with

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its beautiful mountains. It has a long-lasting

traffic

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jam which it is still not settled,

it

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can't build any skyscrapers. To construct the ring

roads

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, there will be better

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