The line graph shows the change in production of three products in Euripean country.

The line graph gives information about the change in production os three products , namely Timber, Pull, Paper , in a European country.

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pulp and paper increased dramatically, Timber fell slowly . As the line graph shows

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for Timber was at 6

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tonnes

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in 1980,

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grew to 9

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decreased slowly to 6

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tonnes

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in 1995, after

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increased dramatically to 7

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tonnes

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in 2000. The

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for Pulp increased to 5

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in 1985.The

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decreased to 4,5

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tonnes

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in 1990 ,

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increased dramatically to 6

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in 2000 . The

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for paper was 3

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tons

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in 1980, after

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increased considerably to 9

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tons

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in 1995 ,

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grew to 10

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in 2000 .