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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
The line graph compares the
population
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 in
China
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 and
India
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 between 2000 and 2020, with their projections until 2050.
Overall
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,
India
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 has shown and is estimated to continue an upward trend. Meanwhile, the figure for
China
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 increased in the past and is projected to fall in the future. The
population
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 of
India
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 reached one
billion
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 in the initial year, which was not only lower than that of
China
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 but
also
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 the lowest for
India
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 during the entire period. From 2000 to 2020, the Indian
population
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 rose sharply to reach 1.4
billion
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,
although
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 it continued to lag behind that of
China
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.
However
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,
this
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 figure is expected to surpass the Chinese
population
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 by 2040, reaching 1.8
billion
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 in 2050.
On the other hand
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, the
population
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 of
China
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 grew gradually from approximately 1.25
billion
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 in 2000 to around 1.43
billion
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 in 2020. It is forecast to remain relatively constant
thereafter
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, before declining marginally to just below 1.4
billion
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 in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, china, india, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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