You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to express my interest in a part-time job in your restaurant. I got to know through an
advertisementnt
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advertisement
that you need a part-time worker in your
brar
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bar
restaurant. Being an international student,
this
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job is important for me. So that
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apply
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I can earn money for my essentials,
such
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as paying tuition fees, buying groceries, and many more.
Moreover
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, I have not only two years' experience as a cook, but I
also
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completed my diploma in culinary arts from my home country.
Besides
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this
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, I am
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studying
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an advanced culinary course
From
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Toronto Cooking
college
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College
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. I am willing to work on the weekend from 7th July. If
that is
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not possible, I would like to work in the evenings from Monday to Friday. I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur.

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spelling/grammar
Fix spelling and wrong words like advertisementnt and brar.
grammar
Use proper form: not only do I have two years’ experience.
structure
Split into paragraphs. Start with your interest, then your work, then dates.
content
Be clear on dates and times; give exact days or a clear window.
tone
Keep a formal tone with a good greeting and closing.
tone
Polite tone and formal closing.
content
Clear aim to get the job.
structure
Gives a date plan for work.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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