The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar
chart
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illustrates
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illustrate
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the percentage of students
studied
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who studied
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the foreign language in
a
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an
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english
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English-speaking
speaking
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apply
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country of
about
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including
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the languages
french
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French
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,
german
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German
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and
spanish
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Spanish
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in
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, in
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the
year
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years
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1984 and 2007.
Linking Words
Overall
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Overall,
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it
clear
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clearly
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states that the
girls
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apply
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percentage is more than boys
and
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, and
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the french
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french
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French
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language is the highest studied by the students.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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