You recently traveled by plane from London to Sydney. Write a letter to the airline company about your experience. In your letter: • Describe the purpose of your trip and when you traveled. • Explain what you liked about the flight and the airline's service. • Mention any areas where you feel improvements could be made. • Provide suggestions or recommendations for enhancing the overall travel experience.

Dear

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madam

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Madam

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, I am writing

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letter to express my views regarding my latest travel with your airline "Superfast", it was

amazing

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an amazing

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eperience

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experience

. First of all,

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traveled

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travelled

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from London to

Sudney

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Sydney

on 12

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August in the evening for my

busniess

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business

meeting.

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journey was very

pleased

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pleasant

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for me,

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enjoyed

alot

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a lot

the

atomosphere

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atmosphere

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the airplane

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airplane

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aeroplane

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, it was very decent and

clam

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calm

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, your crew members were very helpful and super friendly. They made my

fly

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flight

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very easy. All flight members provided

best

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the best

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sevices

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services

and they

asking

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asked

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frequently

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apply

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if anybody

need

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needed

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anything.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

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cannot forget the food

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flight

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the flight

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was very

delighted

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delicious

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and tasty.

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, there was a problem that

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the seat

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seat

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seats

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and seat belts of

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the airplane

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airplane

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aeroplane

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was

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were

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very

unconfortable

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uncomfortable

, and they were not adjustable according

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to a

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person

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person's

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weight.

Which

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This

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created little

hardness

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difficulty

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for me to sit properly.

In addition

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would like to suggest

you

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apply

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one recommendation , if you could change your airline seats

with

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moveable and adjustable seats ,

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you can become

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the nations

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nations

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nation's

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best airline company. I hope you

would

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like my

advise

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and

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, and

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will wait to fly with you again. Yours

faithfull

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faithfully

, Jaz

jaspreetkaur221097

Sep 18, 2025

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structure

Use clear paragraphs. Each new idea goes in a new paragraph.

language

Fix spell and cap I and your name. Use full stops and correct form.

content

Give a clear date and flight detail in a simple way.

content

Say what you like with one or two clear points and give one idea for change.

format

Close with a short, clear sign off and your name.

tone

Keep a polite and calm tone all through the letter.

content

The aim of the letter is clear.

tone

The tone is polite and kind in many lines.

content

It shows thanks to the crew and care for good service.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

194 words

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