The pie charts display how electricity production by various energy sources has changed in Scotland in 20 years.

The pie charts display how electricity production by various energy sources has changed in Scotland in 20 years.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts display how electricity production by various energy sources has changed in Scotland in 20 years.
The pie
chats
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illustrates
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illustrate
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the multiple energy resources used to produce electricity in
scotland
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Scotland
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and
its
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their
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changes over 20 years.
Overall
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, usage of coal for power production is the most common source both in the past and the present.
Likewise
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, the least preferred source is the hydro pumped storage.
Firstly
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, the three major production house for
generating
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electricity
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houses
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20 years ago
are
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coal (41.1%), gas (22.3%) and nuclear (19.6%).
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, those 3 factors
remains
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the highest
power generating
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power-generating
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sources in the current year with 32.7%, 21.7% and 26.4%, respectively, though coal and gas
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slightly reduced
except
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nuclear being in demand.
Next,
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hydro natural flow has dropped from 8.7% to 7.9% in two decades
and
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the hydro pumped storage has decreased by 0.9%, likely.
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, the oils and other renewables used
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increased from 2.1% and 2.8% to 4.0% and 5.1% over the years, respectively.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy
  • electricity
  • source
  • chart
  • pie
  • share
  • part
  • rise
  • increase
  • growth
  • fall
  • decrease
  • change
  • trend
  • pattern
  • Scotland
  • 20 years
  • renewable
  • wind
  • solar
  • hydro
  • coal
  • oil
  • gas
  • nuclear
  • policy
  • government
  • target
  • cost
  • price
  • job
  • impact
  • effect
  • advantage
  • disadvantage
  • compare
  • contrast
  • overall
  • conclusion
  • however
  • although
  • while
  • so
  • therefore
  • as a result
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