In many countries today there are highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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students

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fail to find a

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upon graduation.

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solutions to it, first by explaining how the

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of social

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among

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measures which can be adapted

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universities

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and the

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themselves. One of the possible causes of the

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is the

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of social

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among

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. Despite being well-equipped with academic knowledge in their tertiary

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because most assignments are submitted in reports and essays, social

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are not

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since they are never a major part of assessments.

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,

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learners generally focus on pushing their academic results, rather than spending time on cultivating practical

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. A decade ago, a

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graduate from the Chinese University of Hong Kong

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to his difficulty in finding a

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placement.

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he blamed

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society for not providing him

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, he was

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by the public for his

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of social and oral communication

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.

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be seen from several

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graduates

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cannot master practical

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, which are essential in the workplace.

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, it is believed that

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lack

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of practical

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is a major factor that can lead to

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. To cope with

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, activities can be

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by

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to cultivate

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social

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. With the help of colleges,

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can be taught to not only focus on academic achievement, but

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are necessary in the workplace.

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, a student affairs office is set in various

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. They can assist in the

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of life-wide learning activities, in which a range of learning events can be arranged around campus. Through joining these activities,

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can be cultivated to be aware of their social

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and make improvements during their study periods in

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, which would facilitate personal improvements and increase

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’ employment opportunities.

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are

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encouraged to actively seek new career opportunities themselves. To enrich

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learning experiences, they can participate in different career-related programmes to gain social and practical

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for their career development. Examples include summer internships offered by different

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, ranging from government sectors,

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small to medium

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enterprises, large corporations and non-government

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. By accumulating first-hand experience in authentic settings,

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can

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their strengths and weaknesses effectively and make necessary improvements before graduation. In conclusion, it is possible that

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graduates fail to find a

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due to

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incapability

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to interact with others in the

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setting. Actions can be taken by

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and

students

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to alleviate the problem.