The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE PIE AND LINE CHARTS PROVIDE KEY INFORMATION ABOUT TWO DIFFERENT TYPES OF INFORMATION ON
CRIME
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, IN THE UNITED KINGDOM ONE YEAR AGO. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN NUMBER OF
CRIMES
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(TENS OF THOUSANDS)
AS WELL AS
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PERCENTAGES.
ACCORDING TO
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THE LINE CHART THAT ILLUSTRATE THE RELATION BETWEEN
AGE
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AND
CRIME
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,
LAST
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YEAR. AT
AGE
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12
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LESS THAN 10
CRIMES
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HAD HAPPENED
THEN
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IT SUDDENLY JUMPED TO 70
CRIMES
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.
WHILE
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AT
AGE
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20 THE FIGURE OF THE
CRIMES
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REACHED
TO
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THE PEAK BY 80 ,BEFORE DECREASING
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28 TO 20
CRIMES
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. THE PORTION OF THE
CRIMES
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EXPERIENCED A FLUCTUATION
UNTILOLD
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UNTIL
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AGE
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THE AGE
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(60
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. IN TERMS OF THE SECOND GRAPH, WHICH SHOWS VARIOUS TYPES OF
CRIME
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THAT HAPPENED
LAST
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YEAR.
FIRSTLY
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, THE HIGHEST PROPORTION FOR VIOLENT
CRIME
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,WHICH COUNTED FOR 46% , FOLLOWED BY PROPERTY
CRIME
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WITH 23%. THE REST
LAST
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TWO TYPES OF FELONY ARE
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DRUG AND PUBLIC ORDER
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BY 22% AND 9% RESPECTIVELY.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, crimes, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line
  • graph
  • trend
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
  • go up
  • go down
  • climb
  • drop
  • peak
  • highest
  • lowest
  • month
  • year
  • total
  • crime
  • UK
  • last year
  • pattern
  • fluctuate
  • vary
  • steady
  • stable
  • sharp
  • gradual
  • gradually
  • sharply
  • month by month
  • pie
  • share
  • portion
  • part
  • type
  • category
  • crime type
  • big
  • small
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • fraction
  • around
  • more
  • less
  • equal
  • bigger
  • smaller
  • higher
  • lower
  • similar
  • different
  • compared with
  • in comparison
  • and
  • but
  • however
  • although
  • therefore
  • so
  • then
  • finally
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