THE PIE AND LINE CHARTS PROVIDE KEY INFORMATION ABOUT TWO DIFFERENT TYPES OF INFORMATION ON 28 TO 20
CRIME
, IN THE UNITED KINGDOM ONE YEAR AGO.
THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN NUMBER OF Use synonyms
CRIMES
(TENS OF THOUSANDS)Use synonyms
AS WELL AS
PERCENTAGES.
Linking Words
ACCORDING TO
THE LINE CHART THAT ILLUSTRATE THE RELATION BETWEEN Linking Words
AGE
AND Use synonyms
CRIME
, Use synonyms
LAST
YEAR. AT Linking Words
AGE
Use synonyms
12
LESS THAN 10 Punctuation problem
12,
CRIMES
HAD HAPPENED Use synonyms
THEN
IT SUDDENLY JUMPED TO 70 Linking Words
CRIMES
. Use synonyms
WHILE
AT Linking Words
AGE
20 THE FIGURE OF THE Use synonyms
CRIMES
REACHED Use synonyms
TO
THE PEAK BY 80 ,BEFORE DECREASINGChange preposition
apply
Change preposition
TO
CRIMES
.
THE PORTION OF THE Use synonyms
CRIMES
EXPERIENCED A FLUCTUATION Use synonyms
UNTILOLD
Correct your spelling
UNTIL
Use synonyms
AGE
(60Correct article usage
THE AGE
)
.
IN TERMS OF THE SECOND GRAPH, WHICH SHOWS VARIOUS TYPES OF Punctuation problem
apply
CRIME
THAT HAPPENED Use synonyms
LAST
YEAR. Linking Words
FIRSTLY
, THE HIGHEST PROPORTION FOR VIOLENT Linking Words
CRIME
,WHICH COUNTED FOR 46% , FOLLOWED BY PROPERTY Use synonyms
CRIME
WITH 23%.
THE REST Use synonyms
LAST
TWO TYPES OF FELONY ARELinking Words
,
DRUG AND PUBLIC ORDER Punctuation problem
apply
CASE
BY 22% AND 9% RESPECTIVELY.Fix the agreement mistake
CASES