You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: – explain your situation – describe your problems – tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear

Mr.

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Singh, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to inform you that

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I was

suppose

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to move to your prestigious apartment next month.

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some

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family emergency, I can't make

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move now. Actually, what happened

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today, I got a phone call from India that my Grandmother had passed away. So, I have to go

India

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to India

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within

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two days

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I was very close to my grandmother, and

also

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I am

single

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child of my parents. I have all the responsibility on my head, and now, I can't stay away from

parents

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during

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situation. As far as I

concerned

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, I will come back

Canada

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to Canada

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into

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next month,

then

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directly

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I will move

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to your apartment. If

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delay caused any inconvenience to you, I

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really apologise for that and I am ready to give you one

month

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rent in advance to hold my bookings. I hope you will understand my circumstances, and I will await

for

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your response at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Harjeet

kaur

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Oct 11, 2025

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grammar

Fix grammar and spelling. Use proper verb forms (for example: 'I was supposed to move' and 'within two days'). Avoid long, run-on lines.

coherence

Make paragraphs with one main idea each. Put the reason, the plan, and the closing in clear order.

content

Be precise with words. Use exact date or time when you think you can move.

tone

Keep a polite and formal tone throughout the letter.

tone

Polite and respectful tone.

content

Gives reason for delay and plan to move in later.

content

Gives a plan to hold the place with money.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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