The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. (Anelya1) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. (Anelya1) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. (Anelya1) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The three pie charts illustrate the average proportions of
sodium
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, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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in typical meals, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much by people.
Overall
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, dinner contains the highest percentage of
sodium
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and saturated fat,
while
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snacks account for the largest share of added
sugar
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among other types. Breakfast shows a similar result of
Sodium
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with just 14%, Saturated fat around 16%
as well as
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,
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added
sugar
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at approximately 16%, it had the lowest result among all types.
In contrast
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, dinner contains high figures of nutrients among other types, with
sodium
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nearly half, saturated fat approximately 37% and the added
sugar
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with just 23%. Snacks recorded nearly three-quarters of
sugar
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,
it
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is the highest type contains
sugar
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,
while
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it contains 21% of saturated fat,
as well as
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a quarter of
sodium
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. Lunch had low
sugar
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, about 19%, Saturated fat around 26% and 29% of
sodium
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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