Water is a natural resources that should be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

THERE IS NO DENYING THE FACT THAT THE

WATER

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IS A NATURAL RESOURCES THAT COME FROM SEAS, LAKES AND WATERFALLS.

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OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THE

COUNTRY

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SHOULD PROHIBIT THE SALE AND THE PURCHASE OF THE

WATER

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. IN

THIS

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ESSAY, I WILL DISCUSS

THIS

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PERSPECTIVE AND EXPRESS MY OPINION. ON ONA HAND, I CONSIDER THAT SALING THE

WATER

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BOTTLED DEPENDS ON THE

COUNTRY

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ITSELF, THE FINANCIAL AND THE ECONOMIC SITUATION AND

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ON THE RETE OF

THE POVERTY

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, IF THE GOVERNMENT PROVIDE EXCELLENT SALARIES FOR THE PEOPLE, SALING THE

WATER

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DOES NOT SHAPE ANY RISK OF HARM FOR THE RESIDENTS AND EVEN THE

COUNTRY

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ON THE CONTRARY

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, THE ECONOMIC OF THE

COUNTRY

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WILL SOAR BY THE YEARS.

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, I CONCUR WITH SALING THE

WATER

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BOTTLED FOR PLENTY OF REASONS,

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AS THERE IS NO RISK AT ALL SINCE WE PURCHASED THE

WATER

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MOREOVER

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, IT HAS MANY BENEFITS FOR THE

COUNTRY

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, AND WHATEVER ADVOCATES THE ECONOMY OF MY

COUNTRY

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, I DEFINITELY SUPPORT IT.

ON THE OTHER HAND

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the

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WATER

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FILTRATION PROCESS IS A COMPLEX PROCEDURE THAT REQUIRES TIME AND EFFORT FROM THE STTAF WHO WORK ON IT. THE WORKFORCE NEED SALARY, THE TOOLS, THE MACHINES NEED ELECTRONICS TO INSTALL THEM,

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THE STORAGE AND THE PACKAGING. WITHOUT SELLING THEM, THERE IS NO INCOME FOR THESE REQUIREMENTS.

FOR INSTANCE

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, ONE OF THE FAMOUS

WATER

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COMPANY SPEND APPROXIMATELY 5 MILLION ONLY ON PACKAGING! TO NUTSHELL,

ALTHOUGH

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THE

WATER

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RESOURCES ARE FREE, THE PROCESS FOR FILTERING AND STORING THEM IS COSTLY. IT IS

ALSO

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POSSIBLE TO SAY THAT IT DEPENDS ON THE FINANCIAL SITUATION OF THE

COUNTRY

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AND

ALSO

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THE NATION THAT LIVE THERE.SO IN MY OPINION, AS IS OBVIOUS, SELLING THE

WATER

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IS THE BEST WAY TO COVER THE MONEY THAT WE HAVE ALREADY SPENT ON THE FILTRATION AND OTHER PROCEDURES.

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