The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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map illustrates the development of a town called Willington in
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the year
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year
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years
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1780, 1860 and 2000.
Overall
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, a clear trend can be observed, in the
eary
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early
ages it started with a lot of green areas, which changed significantly over the years to a more developed city with facilities, homes and transport. In 1780, it started with four farms in the
center
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centre
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of the map, with about 100 homes in two villages,
wheras
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whereas
in 1860 it developed to just two farms and
grown
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grew
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by one more village and increased the buildings by 100.
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, in 2000 the blocks increased five times the amount as in the year of 1780 and
also
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upgraded the village to 6.
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, in the
east south
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eastern
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part of the town, the village had a forest in 1780, which
reduced
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was reduced
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in 1860 to
round
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apply
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about
a
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apply
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half and
then
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vanished in
year
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the year
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2000.
In contrast
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to 1780, the river had in 1860 a bridge
wich
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which
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was
also
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connected with a road,
while
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in 2000 Willington built a wetland for the birds at the bottom of the river and
also
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added five shops near
to
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apply
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the river. The breakthrough started in 2000, when the population
grown
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grew
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and
new
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a new
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road was built
which
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, which
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was connected to the new two schools and three
sport
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sports
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fields.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • surrounded by
  • transformation
  • industrialization
  • modernization
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • transportation infrastructure
  • expansion
  • significant
  • comparisons
  • notable
  • impact
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