The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the percentages of children from four countries taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of four activities (watching TV, reading, art, and riding
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bike) of three
groups
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of Australian kids in 2018.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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watching TV was the most popular among all three ages,
while
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the art
activity
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came
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was
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least
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the least
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.
Whereas
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, reading and riding the bike
preference
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are preferred
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activities
between
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among
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12 to
16
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16-year-olds
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old. Watching TV accounted for less than 100% of children among all three
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. Riding the bike, the most common
activity
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between 12 to 16 ages (around 80%),
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also
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is also
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relatively common
within
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among
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children who are 5 to 8
years
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old (nearly 80%).
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, the reading
activity
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was the favourite within the two
groups
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to 11
years
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old and 12 to 16
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old (about 60%). I comparison, the art
activity
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chosen by 5 to 8
years
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old almost 60%, followed by the other two
groups
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with less than 60%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, activity, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rate
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • activity
  • comparison
  • trends
  • cultural preferences
  • notable differences
  • popular
  • least popular
  • indoor activities
  • outdoor activities
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