The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant

The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant
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The line chart above
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illustrates
the use of
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renewable
energy in the USA over 7 decades.
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The
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total
conusmption
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consumption
of energy is
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identified
in
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line and shows an obvious growth
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throughout
the years. The consumption of hydroelectric power increased steadily from 1.8 Quadrillion in 1945 to 2.5 Quadrillion in 1975. After which
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started to fluctuate. Reaching a final point of 2.2
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quadrillion
. Regarding wood consumption, it
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plateaued
between the years 1949 and 1975.
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maintence
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maintenance
was followed by an obvious rise in the next 2 decades. After
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, it started to decline slightly to
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eventually
reach the same
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amount
as the
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point in 1949.
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Interestingly
, the
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introduction
of
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biofuels
and
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wind
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began at a later point. Specifically in 1981, explaining the decrease in the use of other
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forms
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of energy at that time. Both continued to rise
steadly
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steadily
without
siginificant fluctation
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significant fluctuation
. With the former showing faster
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growth
than the
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.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trend
  • renewable energy
  • stagnant level
  • increase in consumption
  • energy policy
  • technological advancements
  • fluctuations
  • public and governmental support
  • cleaner energy sources
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • peak consumption
  • significant improvement
  • shift
  • dips or slowdowns
  • economic recessions
  • governmental policy
  • investments
  • timeline
  • comparative analysis
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