The three pie charts show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.

The three pie charts show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three pie charts show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.
The figure above illustrates the consumption,
production
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, and
profit
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distribution of coffee around the world in three
seperate
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separate
color-coded
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pie charts. The
overall
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view shows that America has the
second highest
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second-highest
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consumption
rate
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with
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, with
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only 2% less than
Europe
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Europe,
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that
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which
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came in
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first place. Regarding coffee industries, South Africa had a significantly higher
rate
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of
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coffe
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coffee
production
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, reaching nearly half of the
world
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production
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.
Furthermore
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,
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the delivary
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delivary
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delivery
sector had the
hight
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highest
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precentage
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percentage
of
profit
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with 51%. When comparing
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coffe consuption
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coffee consumption
worldwide to
Erurope
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Europe
, America, and Japan, we find that it is
obviosuly
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obviously
less than the former two but more than the latter.
interestingly
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, Japan produces 10% higher amount of the
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coffe
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coffee
it consumes.
Moreover
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, East Asian
contries
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countries
had the lead in the
production
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industry with
Indonisia
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Indonesia
,
Jpana
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Japan
, and Vietnam making 56% of the total
worlwide
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worldwide
production
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rate
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combined. Regarding
profit
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distribution, producers alongside exporters had a total of 25% of
profit
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distribution. Nearly similar to
retailers
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the retailers
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sector alone. Which had twice the
profit
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rate
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as each one of them
seperatly
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separately
. In
conclusin
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conclusion
, East asian
contries
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countries
combined had the
hgihest
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highest
exporting
rate
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of
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coffe
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coffee
to the rest of the world. America and Europe had the largest
consuption
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consumption
rate
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with 80%. The
delivary
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delivery
sector had the largest
overall
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profit
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rate
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, profit, rate, coffe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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