The two pie charts below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years .

The two pie charts below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years .
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two pie charts below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years .
The two charts display information about the 5 primary powers'
production
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in France in the years 1995 and 2005.
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, it is noticeable that petroleum energy
production
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decreased dramatically over the period, but the
production
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of nuclear
power
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increased significantly over the years. And coal and gas
production
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remained relatively stable. The petro industry in 1995 was one of the most important powers in French society , estimated at nearly 29%. By 2005, the need for petro
power
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had fallen to around 19%.
whereas
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nuclear
power
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had the second lowest
production
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in 1995, with over 5%, in 2005, nuclear
power
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saw a sharp rise in its
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, with almost 11% In 1995, France confined their efforts to produce coal
power
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, with just 29.80%. After 10 years,
this
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power
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still plays a significant role in the French industry, with exactly 30.93%.
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, gas
power
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faced the same fate as coal
power
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, with 29.63% and 30.31%, respectively. Other manufacturers witnessed a growth from just 4.9% to approximately 9%

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