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The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table gives information about
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consumption
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the consumption
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 of
coffee
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 shop
products
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 in an office building on a typical weekday.
Overall
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,
while
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 the total amounts of food and drink
consumption
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 are almost the same,
tea
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 has experienced the least
amount
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 of
consumption
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 among all
products
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 on a weekday. Looking at the details, the total
amount
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 of
coffee
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consumption
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 is 795, and it is almost three times higher than that of
tea
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.
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, the total
amount
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 of both
coffee
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 and
tea
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consumption
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 in the morning and afternoon
are
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is
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 higher than that of
consumption
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 in the late afternoon and evening.
Coffee
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 is the most preferred drink, with 265
products
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are
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apply
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sold in the morning, and it is more than twice as much as
tea
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consumption
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. Pastries are the most consumed
products
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 with 275 pastries in the morning;
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, sandwiches are the least consumed
products
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 with 50 sandwiches in the morning.
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, sandwiches experienced the highest
amount
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 of
consumption
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 with 200 in the afternoon.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, coffee, products, tea, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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