The chart below shows the percentage of people in a city in the UK using the internet for different activities in 2007 and 2009.

The chart below shows the percentage of people in a city in the UK using the internet for different activities in 2007 and 2009.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of people in a city in the UK using the internet for different activities in 2007 and 2009.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people in a city in the UK who used the
Internet
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for different activities in 2007 and 2009.
Overall
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, shopping and banking were the most common
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activities in both years,
while
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learning and watching TV were the least popular. In 2007, around 45% of people used the
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for shopping, making it the most popular activity. Banking was the second most common purpose, with about 40%, followed by listening to music at approximately 35%. By 2009, shopping saw small increases of about 5%.
However
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, banking and listening to music decreased of about 5%. Regarding the other categories, around 25% of people used the
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for job seeking in 2007, rising to about 30% in 2009. The figures for playing games and learning online were lower, both around 15% to 20%. Watching TV online was the least popular activity,
although
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it still increased slightly from about 10% to nearly 15% during the same period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • share
  • internet
  • city
  • UK
  • activity
  • use
  • most
  • least
  • popular
  • common
  • different
  • higher
  • lower
  • top
  • bottom
  • increase
  • decrease
  • rise
  • fall
  • grow
  • drop
  • stay the same
  • stable
  • change
  • trend
  • pattern
  • data
  • chart
  • information search
  • emails
  • social media
  • online shopping
  • watching videos
  • streaming
  • online banking
  • online games
  • learning online
  • compare
  • difference
  • in contrast
  • for example
  • however
  • although
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