The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart below illustrates the average per month alter in the amount of money spent on three metals: Zinc, Copper, and Nickel. over a
one year
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period
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that the Zinc’s price changed
while
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displaying an upward trend.
In contrast
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, the
Nickle’s
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Nickles’
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average of the money spent dropped
significantally
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significantly
.
Moreover
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,
The
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copper remained relatively stable. The
Nickle
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Nickel
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change in price decreased substantially. With 6%, at the beginning of the
period
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to
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exactly -3% in June.
Moreover
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, the trend increased gradually
unitl
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until
it reached  -1% , and it remained
consitent
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consistent
for 3 months in a row. The
Zinc’s
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Zinc
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porportion
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proportion
experienced some fluctuations throughout the
period
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. In
February
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February,
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it was 3% it reduced substantially to -1% in
june
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June
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. For nearly a quarter of the
year
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year,
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it stayed unchanged with around -0.5%.
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,
The
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copper’s percentage fell to almost twice as less , from 2% to just over
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1%. Eventually, it’s proportion
returend
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returned
to its
startting
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starting
point just below 2% by the end of the
period
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "substantially" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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