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The line graph below show the number of car produced in three different countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releveant The line graph below show the number of car produced in three different countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releveant

The line graph below show the number of car produced in three different countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releveant The line graph below show the number of car produced in three different countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releveant
The supplied graph offers a comprehensive breakdown of how
much
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many
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 cars
made
Verb problem
were made
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 in three different places from 2003 to 2009.
Overall
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, the data evince a general upward trajectory for Australia and Thailand ,in stark contrast to a steady decline in Argentina. Commencing at 161 in
2003
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2003,
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 the figures for Thailand witnessed a dramatic surge, peaking at 999 in 2009
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,Argentina plummeted from 400 to a mere 100 over the same timeframe.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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