You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for: Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

Dear John, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am writing in connection with the work-related workshop

that is

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going to happen

this

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month.

Few

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A few

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of the other employees and I want to be a part of the seminar, and want to know the dates that have been finalised. Apart from that, I heard that

the

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apply

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one of the

topic

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topics

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is going to be on social media marketing. I really liked that, and hoping to hear

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about

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the other interesting topics as well. I would appreciate

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it if

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you

also

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provide the information about the program schedule as well.

Moreover

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, everyone wants to know about the ticket price for the event, and if there will be discounts for the

eployees

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employees

of the company or

may be

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maybe

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group discounts. Can I visit you in your department after work to get all the details? If not, we can arrange the meeting as per your

availablity

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availability

. I will be waiting for your response. Yours

truely

Correct your spelling

truly

, Lovprit Kaur

lvbajwa22

Nov 16, 2025

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grammar

Check for simple spell and fix easy mistakes like 'colleagues', 'employees', 'truly'. Use plain words.

structure

Make text clear by using one idea in each paragraph. Start with why you write, then date and plan, then cost, then meeting.

tone

Keep a formal tone and avoid long, run-on sentences. Use short, straight sentences.

formality

Make the opening and closing strong: 'Dear John,' and 'Yours sincerely' or 'Yours faithfully' with correct spelling.

content

Polite tone and clear request for dates, program, and cost.

structure

Shows willingness to meet to get more details.

content

Overall purpose is easy to see and it stays on point.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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