The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I agree with

this

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solution

but

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, but

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I think

that

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it is

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a little more

diffcult

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difficult

to resolve the problem. The reason is

because

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that

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the governments need to study

about

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apply

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the speeds, highways, and the

quantity

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number

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of cars that

the

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apply

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people have per family. The traffic problem's maybe can be resolved with train lines like

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those

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big

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in big

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cities in the first world.

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Nov 17, 2025

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structure

Make a clear plan. Start with a short intro, then 2 or 3 ideas, then a short conclusion.

grammar

Use simple grammar and fix common errors like diffcult to difficult and other word choices.

content

Explain why 24/7 free transport helps with traffic, and give 1 or 2 clear points.

coherence

Use linking words to join ideas, like also, but, and, however, to make flow.

content

You show you have a view on the issue.

structure

There is an idea about train lines in big cities.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

60 words

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