You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to discuss
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an issue at the airport that caused me to miss my international
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with your airline. On 14 November, I arrived at the airport well in advance, but the self-service check-in
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not working. Many passengers were waiting, yet no staff were available to assist us for the time being. When
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employee
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arrived, the system was restarted, but the check-in desk had already closed, leaving me unable to board the
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. Missing my
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created major problems. I had an important meeting the next morning, which I could not attend, and I had to buy a new ticket at a higher price.
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situation caused both financial loss and significant stress.
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, I kindly request a refund for the missed
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and compensation for the extra costs I had to pay. Yours faithfully, Elvira

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grammar
Fix small grammar. For example, say 'the self-service check-in was not working' and 'no staff were available'.
structure
Try one idea per paragraph. Start with what happened, then how it hit you, then what you want.
request
Be clear on what you want. State the refund and the extra costs you ask to cover.
content
The letter shows what happened well and it says what you want.
tone
Polite tone and clear call for action are good.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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