You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter • express your interest • ask for details of the work that needs to be done • let them know when you are available.

Dear Mam/Sit, I am writing

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letter because I just saw your ad on 24 Oct 2025 in the World's Time newspaper about the vacant position of Volunteers.

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, I would like to suggest my name for the job because I always want to work as a volunteer to gain some experience for my resume.

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, I really love kids, as it would be a great opportunity to work as a volunteer, as I do have prior experience in

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field, working in one of the renowned museums in our locality.

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, I want to know what type of materials I need to buy for

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job, eg, a Pen, a pencil or a notebook, etc. I am available on every Monday, Tuesday, and Friday as I have just completed my studies and am waiting for my completion letter, so for that time, I would be really glad if you could give me

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opportunity.

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, I saw your organisation's address in the advertisement, and it's just 10 minutes away from my home, so it will be easy for me to commute. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from your side. Yours faithfully Jasmeen kaur

jasmeen020805

Nov 20, 2025

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greeting

Fix the greeting. Use 'Dear Sir or Madam,' instead of 'Dear Mam/Sit'.

structure

Split the text into short parts. Start with your interest, then ask for details, then say when you can help.

coherence

Use one idea per paragraph. Right now the text has many ideas in one big block.

task

Be clear about what you want. Say you would like to know the exact tasks and the needed work.

grammar

Check grammar and spelling. Use 'Mondays' not 'every Monday' and not 'advert'.

content

Keep it short and direct. Avoid extra words like 'World's Time'.

content

You show you want to help and you care for kids.

timing

You tell when you can work, so they can plan.

practical

You note you live near the place, so travel is easy.

experience

You have some past work with kids that may help.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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