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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table provides data on the total
number
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 of full-time
students
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 from India who studied in six UK universities for the academic years of 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.
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, it can be clearly seen that in the academic year of 2020/2021, BPP
University
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 had the highest
number
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 of
Indian
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students
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 compared to the other five. All of the universities experienced a significant rise in terms of the
number
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 of full-time
students
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 from India.
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, Coventry
University
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 had the largest
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number of
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growth.
On the other hand
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, Sheffield
University
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 recorded the highest percentage increase in the
number
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 of
Indian
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students
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. Looking in detail, in the academic year of 2020/21
BPP
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, BPP
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University
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 had the highest
number
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 of
students
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 with 3505
students
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, meanwhile Sheffield
University
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 had the lowest with 815
students
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. The
number
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 of
students
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 was changed for the following academic year, making Coventry
University
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as
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the
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 with
highest
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 total of
Indian
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students
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 of 5290,
whereas
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 Sheffield maintained its position as the sixth rank in terms of total of
Indian
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students
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 with 2345. With regard to the change in numbers, Anglia Ruskin
University
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 and the
University
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 of Leicester had the fifth and sixth largest increases, with rises of 1340 and 1215
students
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 respectively.
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, the universities with the three lowest percentage increases were the
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 of Greenwich, Anglia Ruskin
University
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, and BPP
University
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, university, indian with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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