The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the gender distribution in six various types of educational
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showing
percentage
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the percentage
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of male and female
teachers
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in each field, in the UK in 2010. In three of the six positions, the percentage
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females exceeded males. At the two lowest
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education,
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/pre-school and Primary school, where the
teachers
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need to take care of students more, an overwhelming majority of
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are women, accounting for approximately 92-98%. The gender gap was smaller in secondary school
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proportion of women was only higher than that of man about 8%. In the college, the gender distribution was
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, with exactly the same percentage. But in the
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educational setting, Private training
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and
University
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, the proportion of male
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was greater than female
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. The number of male teacher exceed twice as many as female
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational setting
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • nursery school
  • higher education
  • proportion
  • outnumber
  • trend
  • comparison
  • historical factors
  • social influence
  • teaching profession
  • data interpretation
  • balance
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