The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the gender distribution in six various types of educational settings,
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showing the percentage of male and female
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in each field, in the UK in 2010. In three of the six positions, the percentage of females exceeded males. At the two lowest levels of education, nursery/pre-school and Primary school, where the
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need to take care of students more, an overwhelming majority of
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are women, accounting for approximately 92-98%. The gender gap was smaller in secondary school; at
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level , the proportion of women was only higher than that of man about 8%. In the college, the gender distribution was incredibly equal, with exactly the same percentage. But in the
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educational setting, Private training institutes and universities, the proportion of male
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was greater than female
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. The number of male teacher exceed twice as many as female
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational setting
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • nursery school
  • higher education
  • proportion
  • outnumber
  • trend
  • comparison
  • historical factors
  • social influence
  • teaching profession
  • data interpretation
  • balance
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