Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss both views and include your own opinion and relevant examples

A large proportion of society believes that some short

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from school are more suitable

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many people claim that a complete

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holiday

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is better for

children

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. From my perspective, short

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are better because these

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help

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to rest and attend classes with higher levels of energy,

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benefits

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of a long

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as learning new skills and

traveling

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to foreign

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should be considered.

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with, a long

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plays an important role in the current education system. If

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have a long break, they can learn new skills.

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, a lot of families consider

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for

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around the world. In these trips,

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will probably learn how to talk with other people and manage unwanted situations.

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, some

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have a favourite sport,

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as chess. In most schools, they do not teach chess, so

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is a decent time to learn or improve their skills in these kinds of hobbies.

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, many individuals believe that several short

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are more effective in the depth of learning because schools typically have boring subjects, students get tired after a

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need a short break to rest and do some self-study.

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short break, they come back to school and continue their lessons.

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continuous process helps them to learn deeply and enjoy their attendance in classes. To illustrate

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, a recent study revealed that students who have short

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every month pass their exams easily, and tutors can teach quickly, because pupils are dominant in lessons

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continuous classes, and teachers can teach new

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without wasting time on previous subjects.

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, a long

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holiday

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is more common these days, and

children

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can follow their goals in other contexts,

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as sport or

traveling

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, short

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showed better results in the process of learning

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these kinds of

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help them to learn better and perform well at exams.