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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a mseum in 1990 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The two plans illustrate the changes made to the ground floor of a
museum
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 from 1990 to 2010. Throughout the time, a few things remained the same,
such
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 as the Natural History Room, the
Museum
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 Office, and the Local History Room, from which only a wall was removed. The most noticeable alteration is the replacement of the statue from near the stairs to the very
center
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 of the floor.
Also
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, the Archaeology Gallery was divided into two smaller zones: a Children’s Interactive Zone and a Poster Display Area. A lift was added between the Natural History Room and the Gift Shop, whose size expanded significantly
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 the addition of a café.
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, the entrance to the
museum
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 was widened, and the Reception was separated from the
Museum
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 Office.
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, the alterations made to the
museum
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 since 1990 were aimed at making visitors more comfortable and engaged with its exhibits.

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task response
Give a short clear overview of changes at the start.
coherence
Use links to show the order of changes and compare the two dates.
accuracy
Be exact about what was moved or added, and avoid stray facts.
language
Use short, simple sentences to keep clear meaning.
structure
Group changes by type and end with a simple overall view.
content
You note many changes in the plan.
structure
You try to compare 1990 with 2010.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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