The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The pie charts compare the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in two different years. There were

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27

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million homes and 22 million homes in 2007 and

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1991,

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respectively. As shown

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in the charts, the

home owner

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homeowner

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represented the largest proportion in 1991, which showed 60%,

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the figure for those increased to 70% in 2007,

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growth.

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, the percentage of private renting remained virtually unchanged at 11%.

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saw a gradual drop in the percentage of social renting, from 23% in 1991 to 17% in 2007. There was a similar change in the social housing, declining from 6% in 1991 to 2% in 2007 and becoming the smallest proportion. In conclusion, people prefer to own their

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homes

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instead

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of renting

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.