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You have decided to leave your current job due to some reason. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, tell him about the decision and mention the reason for it describe what you have learnt in the job request for a recommendation letter and experience letter

Dear Nichole, I
an
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am
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 writing
this
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 letter to inform you that I am going
quit
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to quit
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 my
join
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job
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which
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, which
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 is
overnight
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 freight handler. Well, there are many reasons behind my
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this
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decision, but the first and
the
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foremeost
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foremost
 is my mental and physical health. I have been facing the problem of insomnia, stress, gut health issues and many more
which
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, which
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 are causing me
alot
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a lot
 of trouble. If
i
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I
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 talk about the
experence
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experience
, I have learned many skills like
team- work
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teamwork
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, leadership and communication skills. Our workplace is multicultural, people from different cultures work together
and
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, and
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i
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I
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 gain good experience
while
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 working with
my all
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team-mates
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teammates
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, supervisor and manager. I would request
you
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for
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a recommendation and experience letter from you, because it would be helpful for me to get another job. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithful
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faithfully
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, Amanpreet Kaur

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grammar
Fix big word error and spelling so the page is clear.
structure
Add a clear start that says you leave and what job you held.
structure
Break the letter into three short parts: reason to leave, what you learned, and request letters.
tone/closing
Use a formal tone and a proper closing such as 'Yours faithfully' or 'Yours sincerely'.
content
Says why you leave.
content
Mentions what you learn.
content
Asks for letters.
tone
Keeps a polite note.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • resignation
  • appreciation
  • professional growth
  • recommendation
  • experience letter
  • skills development
  • team collaboration
  • career transition
  • opportunity
  • support
  • guidance
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