Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

Dear

sir

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Sir

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, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that

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have lost

the

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apply

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loptop

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laptop

airport

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the airport

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while

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travelling to India to visit my family. The

laptop

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is silver in colour, my

laptop

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is of

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the HP

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brand

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brand,

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about $1,490. Well, I remember

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was using

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laptop

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a laptop

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while

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waiting for my flight. When the

attendend

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attendant

announced my flight

number

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number,

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I shut down my

laptop

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and put it with my other belongings.

Then

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went to

restroom

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the restroom

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and when

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came back,

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I collect

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collect

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collected

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all my belongings

and

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, and

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found that my

laptop

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was missing. I asked people who were present there

and

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, and

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they did not see anything. I was

dispointed

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disappointed

because

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was unable to do something.

Suddenly

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Suddenly,

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I saw security at

airport

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the airport

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and

explain

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explained

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the

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whole situation

they

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. They

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also

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tried to help me,

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due

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but due

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lack

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a lack

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of time

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, i

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could not find my

laptop

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and leave for my flight because they were announcing my name. I request you to

reinburse

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reimburse

the cost of my

laptop

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so that

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could take any

further

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step

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steps

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. If you need any document, kindly feel free to ask me. Thank you for

you

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your

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time. I hope

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can hear from you very soon. Amanpreet kaur

aksandhu0597

Dec 17, 2025

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task response

Plan what you will say. Start with what you lost, where and when, then say what you want the firm to do.

coherence logical structure

Put one main idea in each paragraph. Do not mix many facts at once.

greeting and closing

Use a good opening and closing. Use ‘Dear Sir’ and a polite ending.

paragraphing

Fix small spell and grammar. Use short and clear sentences.

content

You tell what was lost and when.

tone

The tone is polite at the start and end.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I
am
writing
to
the
manager
of
my
insurance
company
policy
number
claim
lost
item
wallet
phone
laptop
bag
color
model
value
price
receipt
proof
police
report
date
time
place
how
where
when
last
seen
evidence
documents
photo
contact
phone
email
address
replacement
payout
reimburse
deductible
cover
pay
support
steps
next
questions
thank
you
sincerely

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