You recently went on a business trip and stayed an a hotel.On getting home,you realize you left some things at the hotel.Write a letter to the hotel manager. Details of your stay The items you left behind What you want the manager to do

Dear Manager, I hope you are doing well. My name is Harnish, and I am writing to request your help for an item which I believe

to be

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was

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left behind at your hotel. I stayed at your place for a duration of 10 days from 04 November to 14 November. I was staying in the private suite on the fourth floor.

Additionally

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, for providing you the exact

datails

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details

, the room number was 420.

This

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room was booked under the name of Himanshu

and

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, and

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we were 3 friends staying there. For my personal use, I was carrying a laptop with me.

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laptop is from

Dell

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the Dell

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company and is black in colour.

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, there is a green sticker of my

company

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company,

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called Bajaj

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, on

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it. As your space

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does

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have a storage room for lost items,

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apply

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I do believe that it might be deposited there. It would be great if you

can

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could

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kindly check that area for my personal

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belongings

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belonging

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belonging,

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as it contains my important information. If it is present there

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then

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, then

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can you kindly write back to me? I will arrange the pickup for it. In case

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apply

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it is not present

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also please

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please also

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inform me. Thank you so much for your time, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards, Harnish

patelharnish38

Dec 22, 2025

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language

Fix spelling and grammar errors, such as 'datails' and 'an a hotel'. Make words clear and correct.

structure

Break long sentences into shorter ones to help flow and understanding.

format

Keep the dates and numbers consistent and easy to read.

coherence

Make one idea in each paragraph and connect ideas with simple links.

tone

Polite tone and respectful request throughout.

content

Clear request to check for the item and to inform if found.

content

Gives specific item details (laptop type, color, sticker, room info).

structure

Good opening and closing lines.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

217 words

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