The bar chart illustrates the trend in eating fruit and vegetables of three groups (men, women, children) in the UK over
a
eight-year period from 2001 to 2008. The data measured Correct article usage
an
in
the percentages of each group eating five servings per day.
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Overall
, all three surveyed groups followed a similar pattern in the proportion of individuals who consumed five servings of those foods daily, with the figure rising steadily before showing Linking Words
the
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a
slightly
decline Replace the word
slight
at the end
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years
of the period. Check wording
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While
women always had the highest rate of people meeting the amount of consumption, the children consistently accounted for the lowest percentage.
The proportion of women who ate the recommended daily diet started at just over 20% and increased Linking Words
stably
for six years and Rephrase
steadily
reached
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reaching
the
peak in 2006 with approximately a third before falling slightly to 30% in the final year.
It is easily seen that both Correct article usage
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groups
men and Punctuation problem
groups,
children
remained during the first three years after started at 17% of males and about 13% of Punctuation problem
children,
kids
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children
Therefore
, their rates increased significantly and Linking Words
also
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reach
the highest point in 2007 (at a quarter for kids and under 30% for males in both 2006 and 2007). In the final surveyed year, the percentage of men dipped modestly by 2%, which was the same Wrong verb form
reached
with
that Change preposition
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one
of kids at 24%.Correct pronoun usage
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