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The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the percentage of the most popular language
courses
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 chosen by native English speakers in the UK Centre in 2020.
Overall
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, most of the women chose Mandarin , and most of the
men
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 chose Arabic to study.
Conversely
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, the lowest ratio of attendance for women was Italian and Polish for
men
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, respectively. In detail, almost one third of women would like to learn Mandarin and 22 per
cent
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 of
men
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 chose to learn Arabic. And both sexes picked Spanish as their second-highest
courses
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. There were four languages chosen by about 10 per
cent
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 of female students, which are Arabic, French, Polish and Japanese. And the other three languages, Italian, German, and Welsh, were chosen by only 3 per
cent
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, 7 per
cent
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 and 4 per
cent
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 of females. Regardless of the top two popular
courses
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, there were three other
courses
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 which selected by over 10 per
cent
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 of male students, which were Mandarin, German and Japanese, respectively. For the rest of the
courses
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, which were French, Italian, Polish and Welsh, were selected by less than 10 per
cent
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 of
men
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, which was 5 per
cent
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, 5 per
cent
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, 3 per
cent
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 and 8 per
cent
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, respectively.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words courses, men, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breakdown
  • native English speakers
  • UK Centre for Foreign Language Learning
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • most popular
  • significance
  • notable trends
  • reflected in
  • traditional preferences
  • least popular
  • perceived difficulty
  • potential implications
  • geographical proximity
  • cultural ties
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