The line graph differs the amount of nitrogen oxide by four types of vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The data displays the emissions of
nitrogen
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oxide by
buses
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, lorries,
petrol
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car
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cars
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and
diesel
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car
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cars
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
buses
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produce
highest
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the highest
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nitrogen
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gas
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and
petrol
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and
diesel
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car
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cars
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emits
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emit
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at
lowest
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the lowest
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level.
Moreover
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,
buses
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and lorries released
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nitrogen oxide
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oxide
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oxides
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gas
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apply
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to
its
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their
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peak level,
whereas
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,
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apply
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cars
shows
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show
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its
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their
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low
emission
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emissions
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. As it can be seen that
buses
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with
speed
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a speed
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of 10 to 60kph
emits
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emit
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less
nitrogen
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gas
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.
However
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, as the speed increased over
60
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60,
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it
keep
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kept
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on increasing.
Therefore
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, lorries
getting
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got
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down
till
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to
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the
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a
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speed of 110kph, but after the speed of
120kph
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120kph,
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it increased drastically.
However
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,
petrol
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and
diesel
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cars
emits
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emit
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a constant and
less
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smaller
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amount of
nitrogen
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gas
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both
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apply
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.
Although
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,
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apply
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Petrol
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cars
leads
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lead
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as compare
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compared
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with
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to
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diesel
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car
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cars
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but stay at a consistent mode. Apart from it,
highest
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the highest
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amount was
produce
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produced
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by
buses
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and
least
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the least
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was
emits
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emitted
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by
diesel
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car
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cars
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nitrogen, buses, petrol, car, diesel, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • emissions
  • nitrogen oxide
  • vehicle types
  • observed period
  • significant increase/decrease
  • emission levels
  • intersections
  • overtakes
  • largest/smallest emitter
  • conclude
  • overall trend
  • emission rankings
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