You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visit you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about a problem that I faced in one of your facilities. I usually visit your facility only in the summer because you have a

nice

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nice,

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cold

jacuzzi

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. First of all, I have recently visited your swimming pool

and

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, and

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I really wanted to swim in the cold

jacuzzi

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However

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The

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the

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temperature of the cold

jacuzzi

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is 12

which

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, which

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is too high.

Therefore

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, I went to the staff to tell them about the issue,

as a result

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they did not do anything to solve it.

However

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, there is a staff is called Kim, when he heard the issue, he apologised to me, and he gave me free entry. I am not satisfied yet, so

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I went to the manager there,

although

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he was not in his office. So, first I am suggesting to you, you ought to change all of your staff because they are not able to solve

oprerational

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operational

issues,

moreover

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, they can offer me ice to add it in the

jacuzzi

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, but

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they did not do it. I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Kim Osama

SSaabb23

Jan 1, 2026

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task response

Be clear on what has happened and what you want. State one fix you want and give a short plan to fix it. Keep a calm and polite tone.

coherence and cohesion

Make one idea in each part. Use simple link words like first, then, and finally. Keep a clear flow of ideas from start to end.

content

The letter shows you care about the pool and want it to be fixed.

content

You tell what the staff did, so the event is clear.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

encountered
cleanliness
facilities
issue
staff
address the problem
quick clean-up
unresolved
implement
regular cleaning schedule
peak hours
thorough inspections
dedicated cleaning staff
maintain cleanliness

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