49.The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table gives information about the average salaries of
people
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across several sectors with different educational backgrounds in 2009.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the higher level of school they had attended, the more they earned on a yearly basis. High school diplomas were the lowest level at which
people
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were paid. In a year, they wouldn't be paid more than $30000. Followed by the Bachelor's degree, the differentiation from the lower class ranged $10000 to $15000. A bachelor’s degree was the second lowest in terms of salary. As long as they had finished their studies, they received higher salaries.
People
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with master's degrees got almost $50000 on average in a year.
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, the postgraduate salary difference with Magister’s wasn't as large as that between master's and bachelor's degrees. Doctoral
people
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's annual salaries were nearly the same as those of Master's.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • earn
  • salary
  • level
  • low
  • middle
  • high
  • sector
  • more
  • less
  • the most
  • the least
  • compare
  • compared with
  • by
  • across
  • three levels
  • rise
  • fall
  • stay the same
  • difference
  • pattern
  • majority
  • minority
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