The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart illustrates the value of
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earnings in different categories in one country in 2015 and 2016,
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the table compares the percentage change in each category over the same period.
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,
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earnings increased in most categories in 2016, with the exception of gems and jewellery.
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, textiles recorded the largest percentage increase,
whereas
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agricultural
products
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showed the smallest change.
According to
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the bar chart,
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earnings from petroleum
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and engineered goods stood at around $60
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and $58
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2015. Both figures rose slightly to around $62
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in 2016, remaining the two largest
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categories.
By contrast
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, textiles had the lowest
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values in both years, growing from about $25
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to roughly $31
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. In terms of the table, gems and jewellery
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the only category to decline, falling by 5.18%. Textiles experienced the most significant growth at 15.24%, followed by engineered goods (8.5%) and petroleum
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(3%),
while
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agricultural
products
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recorded the smallest increase, at just 0.81%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, products, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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