The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates key information about what exports in 3 nations( Australia, Canada and Europe). The units are measured in million
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that Canada begins with the highest number.
In addition
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, Australia and the European Community had the lowest rate.
Whereas
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by
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the end
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end
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end,
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the green line was the highest number.
According to
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what is shown, the red line showed decline
slightly
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apply
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,
then
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grew rapidly. After that plunged to nearly 14 million
tonnes
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. By the end of the period had almost 17 million
tonnes
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. In terms of Australia was the lowest number was about 13
tonnes
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at the end
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. It had fallen gradually after 1986.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • decline
  • rise
  • surpass
  • modest growth
  • significant
  • stability
  • comparisons
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