Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests. You do NOT need to write any address.

Dear

madam

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Madam

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, I am writing in connection with my son, who

need

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school

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because of our movement.

Recently

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Recently,

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I and my family

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my family and I

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decided to move from

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our previous

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town

due to

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the fact that my husband received a new place of work. If it is possible, I would like to ask for a place in 7 form for Chris. My son is

very

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friendly and good child.He is brave in math

and

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we try to

develope

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develop

his

knowledges

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knowledge

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the soroban

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soroban

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method of calculating and extra hours of

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discipline with a

techer

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teacher

.He

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had

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imense

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immense

interest

for

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music, he went to the guitar class

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for 3

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years

and

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played

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also played

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also

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the previous

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school

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orchestre

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orchestra

.l swear that teachers will help him to fit in the class, and children will not

bulling

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him.We chose

this

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school

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beacuse

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because

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is the best

school

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from

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town,

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recommendation

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, and

google

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feedback.I would be grateful if

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matter could be resolved as soon as possible. I look forward to your response. Kind regards, Adriana

adrianasofianu2008

Jan 11, 2026

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language

Check spelling and fix grammar to be clear.

structure

Use short, simple sentences and put one idea in each paragraph.

tone

Keep a formal tone when writing to a school.

content

Give exact facts about your child’s work and interests.

tone

Polite start and finish

content

Clear aim to join this school

content

Mentions your son’s math and music interest

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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