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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows he percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line chart illustrates what proportion does
Australia
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's
exports
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 to
Japan
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, the United States,
China
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, and
India
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. Between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
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, it is evident that both
India
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 and
China
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 increased throughout the period of time given. It can
also
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 be seen that
China
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 ended out as the nation receiving the most
exports
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.
However
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, the remaining countries’ percentage dropped dramatically. Eventually,
Japan
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 remained unchanged by the end of the period. In 1990,
Australia
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 exported 26 per
cent
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 to
Japan
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.
On the other hand
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, the figures for
China
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 were lower at 1 per
cent
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. After some ups and downs,
exports
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 to
Japan
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 tended to decrease continually to around 17% in 2012.
China
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's
exports
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 increased sharply in 2012, reaching 28 %, which was the highest number of
exports
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 for
Australia
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. Turning to the remaining countries, the trend for the U.S. and
India
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 was quite similar. They both experienced some fluctuation, but the United States overtook
India
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 to become around 7 per
cent
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 of
Australia
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's
exports
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.
Whereas
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India
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's trend dropped slightly, reaching 5 per
cent
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, exports, japan, china, india, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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