The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs
depicts
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the percentage of International graduates from UK universities in the
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year
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years
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2000 and 2015
Linking Words
Overall
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Overall,
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there is a
growth
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of
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in
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number
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the number
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on
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of
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six UK universities from the
year
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2000 to 2015.
With
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apply
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London
showing
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shows
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the most significant
growth
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. London, Bristol and Bath started with just under 10% in the
year
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2000. Cardiff started with 10% in the
year
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2000
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2000,
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while
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Oxford and Cambridge started
in
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with
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just over 10% in 2000. By the
year
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2015
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2015,
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London showed a significant
growth
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to
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of
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about 20%.
While
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bristol
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Bristol
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showed a small
growth
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to just under 10%

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, growth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Compare
  • Fluctuations
  • Patterns
  • Implications
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Global events
  • International education demand
  • UK universities
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