You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to seek help from you regarding the loss of my wallet

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the Mansa station. It is made of leather and

black

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is black

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in colour. The wallet not only

include

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includes

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bank cards but

also

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my driving licence, which

are

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mandatory for me.

Furthermore

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, on 23rd October, around 2:30 P.M., I was sitting at the desk near the ticket office, waiting for the A123 train as I was going from Bathinda to Patiala. I kept my bags on the desk next to me.

Suddenly

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Suddenly,

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the train had arrived, and I boarded it in a hurry. After half an hour

departure of

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of departure

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the

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from the

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transportation, I realised about the thing that I had forgotten

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something at

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the station. I would appreciate it if you

help

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could help

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in finding

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find

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the wallet. Once you have it, you can either call me at +123244 or email me at [email protected]. I

wil

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will

pick it up by myself

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, or

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someone on my behalf will visit your office

for taking

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to take

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it. I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur

rupindersamrow222

Jan 22, 2026

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language accuracy

Fix small grammar errors and spellings, like 'includes', 'will', and 'collect'. Use 'I left it at the station' and 'I would like you to help find it'.

coherence

Put the ideas in separate lines or parts: one part for what the item is, one for where and when you left it, and one for what you want the company to do.

tone

Keep a formal tone. Start with 'Dear Sir/Madam' and end with 'Yours faithfully'.

form

Give exact contact details in simple form, and avoid too many numbers in one line.

content

Check your place and date and stay true to what you did.

content

The letter tells what the item is and the date and place.

purpose

It asks for help and gives how to contact you.

tone

It uses a polite tone with greeting and closing.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable
distinguishing features
route
carriage
seat number
lost and found department
appropriate steps
contact information
swift and positive action
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