The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998. Summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph shows trends of total crime
arrests
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among people aged under 18 years, in three different urban settings (urban, suburban and rural). From an
overall
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view, there is a peak
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1996 in all
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three areas.
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, rural and rural lines are quite similar,
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suburban
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the suburban
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one has a different shape. In the suburban
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there has been a sharp increase
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arrests
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among young people from 2% in 1995 to 8% in 1996.
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, there is a rapid decline of the line, reaching a minimum of 2% in 1997, followed by another increase. In the rural
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there is
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higher percentage of
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(3%) during 1995, followed by a steady state until 1996 and a subsequent decrease until 1998. In the Urban area,
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has the lowest percentage of
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during 1995 (almost 0.5%), there is a gradual increase until 1996, when there is a peak (almost 2%). After that period, urban and suburban lines are quite similar
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a gradual decline of
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until 1998.

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