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The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The following table shows the
figures
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 of food and beverages sold in a
coffee
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 shop on a typical weekday from 7:30am to 08.30pm.
Overall
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,
coffee
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 and pastries are the most popular
items
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 throughout the day,
whereas
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 tea recorded the lowest
sales
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.
In addition
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, the highest total
sales
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 were evident in the breakfast
period
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. To elaborate, from 7:30 to 10:30, the
coffee
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 shop had the biggest
sales
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 at 265 cups of
coffee
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 and 275 pastries sold,
while
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 the
figures
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 of tea and sandwiches were only 110 and 50 sold, respectively, totaling 700
items
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. During the next
period
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 (10:30 to 2:30) which was almost lunch time, the total
sales
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 declined to 530
items
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.
While
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 sandwiches became more popular, rising to 200
sales
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,
coffee
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sales
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 fell to 185.
Likewise
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, the
figures
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 of tea sold (50) was almost 50% fewer than those sold in the morning. The
sales
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 of pastries
also
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 plummeted from 275 to 95. In the afternoon
period
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 — 2:30 to 5:30 — the total
sales
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 dropped to 370, which was the lowest number of the day.
However
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,
sales
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 increased again in the
last
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period
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; the
figures
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 rose to 465
items
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 in total.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figures, coffee, items, sales, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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