Me The line graph illustrates the use of 3 kinds of fast food in Britain between 1970 and 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph below shows the consumption of fast food in
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by Britain citizens from 1970 to 1990, with an interval of 5 years.
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, two lines significantly increased during the examined period,
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except
one trend which had slightly decreased. At the beginning, in 1970, pizza was a favourite choice by
Britans
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Britons
, with 300
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.
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, from 1970 to
1980
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1980,
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its popularity marginally declined to 200
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. Between 1980 and 1990, its trend plateaued and converged with other
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types
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of meals, being the least popular. The second place of popularity among British people was taken by Fish and chips, with almost 90
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per week, in 1970. From 1970 to
1990
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1990,
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its trend considerably rose, having an upward tendency and reaching 500
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,
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gaining the leadership. Hamburgers, in 1970, were at the lowest point
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however
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, from 1970 to 1990,
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their
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consumption began to go up
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it
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had
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pizza's second place with 300
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per week.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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